Two Sentence Horror #2

Posted: March 1, 2014 in Mini Horror
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I held my darling bride so close, her face pressed into mine. The breath froze in my lungs as the killer stepped over her bullet riddled body, not noticing me underneath.

Jeff Goulding, February 2014

Comments
  1. I really love the contrast between the two sentences, and the brevity of the piece gives it a real punch.

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